Chopper wrote:I haven't got a clue where I am or what I'm doing. I think I may have had too many "free" shots at the bar I was working in.
I'll meet you all back at Frank's - I'm gonna get some cheap whores over.
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Chopper wrote:I'll meet you all back at Frank's - I'm gonna get some cheap whores over.
Frank will follow the drone into the back of the truck after N-zo concludes his business with the meatman.Frank wrote:Good luck with that Chopper, you'll make it into mine just fine. But unless you like fucking hookers with more than the usual amount of big holes you'd better not take them near the security drones y'dig.
Frank wrote:Right, Tits wants us over to her place now that particular diversion is dealt with.
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Righto, brief catch up from yesterday.
You told dae everything that happened (ish).
She was happy with your report, seemed to know of Caine already, but was surprised about the yaks.
She paid the agreed fee (5k each I think) plus 10k for dealing with xa and 10 for doing the job nice and quiet.
She thanked you, let you know she would recommend you and implied that you would be contacted for more work.
She then left.
I think that's everything. Run over, I'll work out karma and feedback later, all that's left is you guys splitting the fee. Fight!
You told dae everything that happened (ish).
She was happy with your report, seemed to know of Caine already, but was surprised about the yaks.
She paid the agreed fee (5k each I think) plus 10k for dealing with xa and 10 for doing the job nice and quiet.
She thanked you, let you know she would recommend you and implied that you would be contacted for more work.
She then left.
I think that's everything. Run over, I'll work out karma and feedback later, all that's left is you guys splitting the fee. Fight!
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Right, Karma has been worked out. You all got 7 each for not dying + completing individual bits of the mission, and a further 3 for either:
Better than average roleplaying (such as Grimmies use of actual proper russian)
Pushing the story forward (a few of you managed this)
Good use of your characters skillzors. (Al's excellent Face work early in the game, lelands astral scouting, Niks sneaky drones.)
Being funny/dramatic
So, 10 each, total. Although for different things. If you want your personal break down of points, feel free to ask, but I think it might be a bit weird posting them for all to see.
Feedback from me: That was pretty well done. You managed things reasonably quietly, picked up on stuff without having to be outright told what's happening and generally did a good job. The only possible criticism is that you maybe overcomplicated things a little on the stakeout: setting up a safe house and cover stories is great, but you probably could have got by without them. But that really is clutching at straws for something to say, its always better to be over-prepared than under.
You are still a little disorganised, but that didn't hold you back any. Each of you is starting to get the hang of your role in the group, so you are just getting on with what needs to be done. You might find later on that this starts to work less though, as things will need to be a bit more coordinated, so you may want to start discussing and settling on a plan, then carrying it out, rather than diving in head first.
Get me some downtimes, and I'll start up the next run!
Better than average roleplaying (such as Grimmies use of actual proper russian)
Pushing the story forward (a few of you managed this)
Good use of your characters skillzors. (Al's excellent Face work early in the game, lelands astral scouting, Niks sneaky drones.)
Being funny/dramatic
So, 10 each, total. Although for different things. If you want your personal break down of points, feel free to ask, but I think it might be a bit weird posting them for all to see.
Feedback from me: That was pretty well done. You managed things reasonably quietly, picked up on stuff without having to be outright told what's happening and generally did a good job. The only possible criticism is that you maybe overcomplicated things a little on the stakeout: setting up a safe house and cover stories is great, but you probably could have got by without them. But that really is clutching at straws for something to say, its always better to be over-prepared than under.
You are still a little disorganised, but that didn't hold you back any. Each of you is starting to get the hang of your role in the group, so you are just getting on with what needs to be done. You might find later on that this starts to work less though, as things will need to be a bit more coordinated, so you may want to start discussing and settling on a plan, then carrying it out, rather than diving in head first.
Get me some downtimes, and I'll start up the next run!